Reuben A

There is a prologue: The moment Xylon and Lioz heard the sound, they both jumped up, their blood curdled. They raced out of the house, and into the lime-green avenue. ...

Just read the edited piece... As they open and you step in, do you see the gruesome view of a bloody red room, made of rock and blood red clay? ...

Hello, I just thought of this, so there''s not much, and it's not great, but please critt. So far, nothing peculiar had happened, which in itself was, well, peculiar. This ...

The demon called lemp, vile and ugly, Capital L Lemp took it with it's smelly green hands. The whole piece you use pronouns like he, but here you use it. ...

I spun around and saw a beautiful girl, about one year younger than me with short blonde hair and a pair of friendly black eyes. She had a black outfit ...

I could hardly believe that my head didn't fly off my body as I sank to the ground and began losing consciousness. How did it feel? Then, they disappeared. Walked ...

“Oh no”, Demeter whispered. “Aren’t they the guys from school? The ones that always get themselves drunk?” I don't know how it's from where you come from, but here we ...

“Oh no”, Demeter whispered. “Aren’t they the guys from school? The ones that always get themselves drunk?” I don't know how it's from where yu comefrom, but here we have ...

This is the last part, so don't read it 'til you've read chapter1-6. “This is a spor plant.” Paspio said pointing towards a big silverish berry, easily twice the size ...

In South-Africa we don't even have Halloween.

Read chapter 1-5 first... Molly’s eyes had slowly become accustomed to the darkness. Although she still couldn't see everything, she could see that there were strange markings on the door. ...

I advise reading the first few chapters before you read this. “Again my lord, I am so sorry.” Fatina said again and applied more soggy leaves around Will’s nose. “Don’t ...

Same made sure Karen was in bed before he left Shouldn't it be Sam? Other than I could find nothing wrong with it. And you've got an interesting cliffhanger that ...

What is Warhammers? A game, a book? I've never heard of it, cold somebody please fill me in?!?!

I was looking for a young writers site, googled it, and viola!